funny stuff
That was pretty good. although i'm not entirely sure what the narator said, It was done really well and funny. Was the Narator's voice inspired by Strongbad?
funny stuff
That was pretty good. although i'm not entirely sure what the narator said, It was done really well and funny. Was the Narator's voice inspired by Strongbad?
Nope go back and try again.
I'm very dissapointed to see this passing. It looks like you put an honest effort into it but what these people fail to see is that it had little animation. It was basicly a bunch of messy drawings put together and slightly animated. If it were up to me I'd blam this, only becuase it could really be alot better if you just went back and tried harder.
It was damn funny
I would have voted to saved it, but the animation wasn't to great. And it felt like it got old towards the end. Still it was damn funny especially about clifford. it was so random and wierd.
almost.
The funny thing about this flash is that it starts out good but gets alot weaker at the end. work on the animation a bit more. And you really needed to add more sound. for those flaws alone I thought it would get blammed but I think it'll make it. well good luck.
a little too short
It was a good animation a little too short, however, for it's file size. I know what the problem is. Set the the sound to 'Stream' insted of 'start'. This will lower the file size and stay synched to the movie.
i had problems with scenes so i just set it to event. thanks for the review anyway.
Not all good.
The whole movie was alight, but only because you put 4 movies in one.
The first Arcade one was ok. It had decent animation but the thing that buged me was the close up view. For that kind of flash it would have been better to just zoomed out all the way so we could see the action a little better. The "story" didn't make much sense to me ethier.
The Mario skater one was the worst of all four. It wasn't anything special just mario skating back and forth doing "tricks". Basically It was just plain boring. after 5 seconds I was just wating for it to End.
The Mario kart one was good. It entertained me and It had some pretty funny action. Plus you made the background yourself and animated it, so not bad.
and finally the last one was ok. Once again nothing special but It was at least a little funny.
Overall the animation in the movies was ok, a lack of sound effects but pretty good music. The bad part is that they were all pretty much boring and didn't entertain me.
nice work
Good job. The animation and drawings were really great. Good amount of violence and I like the athmospehre you made for it. Of course I didn't like how it cut short just when it was getting good, but that fine since it is a teaser. One thing that Bugged me is that the girl just didn't go with the rest of the flash. She's a cool character in the flash, but her appearence just didn't go so well with the tone of the flash.
Not that I have anything against blondes but perhaps making her hair color darker woud help. Or anything else that would project her hardcore personality.
well other than that though the flash was great and I can't wait to see more.
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