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i hope this makes it

sure it didn't have that much animation or draeings, but it was actually funny. i'm gonna be very sad if this dosnt get through the portal. Good luck man

stream sound!!!

That was actually quite funny (ironic huh?). well one BIG problem i noticed is that the sound wasnt syched up to the movie. plus the filesize seemed a little too big. I'm pretty sure what your problem is that you didnt set your sound to "stream". when update it later fix it up. im sure it'l synch it up better and it'l reduce the file size.

LordLothlorien responds:

I tried to set the sound to stream, but... yeah. Things went terribly awry and sounds were playing where they weren't supposed to. I eventually gave up. I'm not sure why it didn't work. I'll try to figure it out for next time, though. Thanks for the review.

not bad

I like how in the end good triumphed over evil. good drawing's, decent animation, but the biggest problem i have is that it ended to abruptly. It just felt like i was cut off from the movie. Try and add a better ending to it if possible.

some freaky stuff

yep, whenever i think of what is yet to come it freaks me out a little. But the flash was defenetly good for your first! awsome stuff. It just makes me wonder what kind of project your sister had.

GrimEntertainment responds:

Thank you! The project was to make a short movie, and make it talk for it self, it could be about anything just a long it was max 3min long, then when I saw a program on the tv about war, it made me think that love is really dying.
Glad you liked it! Thanks again!

too short damn it!!

omg! you used music from Timespliters! Not too many people know about that awsome game. well, you did make a few improvements on it, but just like your other movies it was too short. seriously it's like we only get a minute worth of plot. still you get points for using TS2 audio!

pretty nice!

alot of people didn't vote high but i actually liked this flash alot. of course there were alot of little problems, such as the sound, and even the flre itself could have been better. But i liked the style of it. I liked how you expressed alot without any of the characters saying a single word. I actually felt sorry for the poor little skull. I also liked the background of his house where you made the clouds pass by, very nice touch. It gave the background some life to it. Just keep working at the little problems and i'll have no problem with this flash

dude get a background!

It's seems like you were experimenting with Action Script on this before you submited it. I like the concept but you really need to get a background. trust me i suck at drawing backgrounds but anything's better than just a white screen!!

Boojamon responds:

The idea behind the background (lacking of) is because they started off as sketches. The idea is they were supposed to be related to the paper.

Actually... there is very little action script in it. Except the loader, of course.

nothin' happened

the animation was so-so, like the last one. The problem I have is that in this flash there was barely anything goin on. I can sum it up in less than a paragraph.

Aliens get slightly closer. General orders giant laser on moon to destroy them all. One Ufo survives.

Thats it! Insted of makeing piece by peice of your story why not just make tham all together. It's not like the file sive will be to big. I got a feeling you're just doing this so you can get more than one flash movie on newgrounds.

pretty cool style

I like the concept, plus it was really well made. I liked the static effects you used through out the movie. that was some crazy stuff. keep it up!

needs to be longer

that was great but just when it was getting good it just ended! you should have added another scene where they show the movie at a theater and in the movie there's crappy tranasisions all over the place. still pretty good.

:3

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